A New Leaf ~Chapter14 part one
February 42010
Okay Im AWARE I havent posted!! Im sorry blame my theatre teacher!!
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Joes Pov
I pointed left “Turn here,” I told Nancy and as she did, I began searching the addresses on the mailboxes lined up along the street, corresponding with the obstreperously large houses. “There it is!” I spotted our address on the only black mailbox, but couldn’t see the actual house. That is until Nancy turned the car into a long driveway, which I apparently missed. “Whoa, this is huge!” Nancy eyes got wide in awe at the mansion in front of us, “How did you get this house?” she parked the car and pulled out the keys but didn’t make a move to get out. Instead she turned to me, waiting for an answer. I sighed, “Mr. Harvey gave it to us to live in.” I told her and reached for the door, but Nancy took a hold of my arm and stopped me. I turned my head at her, she was staring at me in disbelief, “Why did you accept it?” she threw her hands up, “He’s just going to want something in return!” she looked at the house when she said this, slightly shaking her head doing so. “No, actually he owed me a few favors.” I informed her and this seemed to ease her back a bit. She stepped out of the car and onto the wet green grass. It was getting dark outside but the sun shone onto the house; illuminating its dark red bricks and tall structure. I got out and walked over to the trunk and began pulling out our bags, Nancy came over and grabs her duffel from me, “Do you have the keys to the house?” she raised eyebrows and looked up at the house, “if you can even call it a house.” she muttered under her breath. I shot her a quizzical look, “what? How do you mean?” I grinned at her as a smile played on her lips, “This house is like a friggin castle!” I chuckled and went over to open the garage doors, “Harvey told me there would be two sets of keys in the kitchen drawers, and the door inside the garage should be open.” I flipped open the keypad and punched in the code “2424, okay?” I made sure she heard me and opened the door inside of the garage. This door lead to what seemed like a small laundry room, I opened another door from there and it lead to a kitchen. “Which drawer?” Nancy eyed the drawers, about 12 of them lined up next to each other going all around the kitchen. She sighed heavily and started opening the drawers two at a time. Frustrated she picked up her speed when she reached the drawer containing the keys they flew out, being the only things in the drawer, and slipped underneath the refrigerator. We both started at the fridge, Nancy huffed out a breath and slumped her shoulders, my life…” she groaned.Whats your deal?” I asked her, but I was actually worried that she was still upset. “Oh I don’t know, maybe its the fact that I haven’t slept properly in days!” she told me with sheepish smile on her face. She looked at the refrigerator once more and groaned. I let out a laugh, “Here I’ll get it,” I crouched down and slid my hand under the shiny silver fridge, and retrieved the two brass keys. When I had stood up to give one to Nancy, she was already gone.
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part two up in a bit!!
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February 4th, 2010 at 5:36 pm
yeah, yeah, yeah!!! …
yeah, yeah, yeah!!!
details…
February 4th, 2010 at 5:36 pm
maybe she can get …
maybe she can get some proper sleep now…lol
February 4th, 2010 at 5:36 pm
Dunno. haha But I …
Dunno. haha But I don’t know a lot of things.
Haha Yeah no worries, my people are my sisters. ha
February 4th, 2010 at 5:36 pm
yeah idk but i …
yeah idk but i didnt get this comment either..hmm maybe utube is suspecting our dealings online? LOL
February 4th, 2010 at 5:36 pm
yeah im-ing YOU!!!! …
yeah im-ing YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!
February 4th, 2010 at 5:36 pm
Hmm… Where’d she …
Hmm… Where’d she go??
She’s either exploring the new house, or playing an outrageous game of hide and seek!
I see you retyped what MSN lost. Lovely!!! I wasn’t sure how long I’d have to wait!
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Stupid creepers watching our IM’s
I loved this, babe!!!
Poor Nancy and her lack of sleep.
It’s probably because she stays up past 11 IMing people.
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Love you, girlllllll!!!!
February 4th, 2010 at 5:36 pm
okay i won’t but eh …
okay i won’t but eh…i could always visit lol
February 4th, 2010 at 5:36 pm
how come my comment …
how come my comment is replying to your comment?? Anyways! Yeah my people is my mum so don’t expect a call too soon haha
February 4th, 2010 at 5:36 pm
hahah! Connections …
hahah! Connections baby! Nice…
I’ll have my people call your people mmkay?
February 4th, 2010 at 5:36 pm
I LOVE THAT ROSEEE! …
I LOVE THAT ROSEEE!!! lol and NO keri baby i dont want you getting tangled up in messes! unless it mean you’ll be moving to Northern VA then by all means PROCEED!!
February 4th, 2010 at 5:36 pm
actually i was …
actually i was describing my house!! xD but yeah TONS of chores to go with it! maids are helpful but they only come on mondayss
February 4th, 2010 at 5:36 pm
Teehe awesome!!!!!! …
Teehe awesome!!!!!! i likey it! i wish i had a big house…but that would mean more chores…-_-…. Awesomee chapter!! now immma go read the next one!
February 4th, 2010 at 5:36 pm
I’m sooooo stoked …
LOVE YOU BABYCAKES!
I’m sooooo stoked for the next part xD I wonder where Nancy went. She’s probably checking out the house. I wonder why Mr. Harvey like, owes Joe. I wonder… He must’ve dealt him or something like that. Anyways, it was an awesome, amazing descriptive chapter! And like! WOO! I lurved it! And I felt totally stupid when I didn’t know what obstreperously meant xD But yeah, I get to use the excuse that I’m Dutch as well as English
February 4th, 2010 at 5:36 pm
A new house… that …
A new house… that sounds interesting… I hope it turns out okay!
and you know, I don’t think Nancy is too fond of Joe right now lol… let’s just hope they can make up!
Great chapter! Loved it!
February 4th, 2010 at 5:36 pm
wow, they’re on the …
wow, they’re on the run but STILL manage to get an awesome house/mansion?! Maybe I should tell my mum to tell her friend to call her brother to get in touch with someone in the business and then get back to me, hmm? lol Seriously, my mums friends brother has connections! Creepy! xD
Everything just keep happening to poor Nancy lol Although, that would probably be me. I’m a clutz lol
Awesome chapter!…again!
Love you!
@;—- Oh look! A rose! ;D haha
February 4th, 2010 at 5:36 pm
Love it!! haha
The …
Love it!! haha
The keys flying under the fridge would happen to Nancy.
How typical! Nothing goes right.
But now where did she wander off to??? With a mansion so freaking huge she could be anywhere!
February 4th, 2010 at 5:36 pm
Yup! That sounds …
It happened to me once, litterally I had like one paragraph in the second part. lolz
Yup! That sounds good! Just use an even amount of story per part, because sometimes you’ll end up with one long part and one super short part. haha
February 4th, 2010 at 5:36 pm
AHHH the first …
AHHH the first chapter is too long!! im like I CANT CUT ANYTHING!!!! should i just make a 2-parter?
February 4th, 2010 at 5:36 pm