Comments on: A New Leaf ~Chapter14 part one

By: irongirlstri

irongirlstri — Thu, 04 Feb 2010 22:36:21 +0000

I can’t wait …
I can’t wait until you get the story up!!!! haha I was about to get off the computer…But I’m gonna wait until you write it. haha CAUSE I WANNA READ IT! Love ya so much girly!

By: babycakesRgood

babycakesRgood — Thu, 04 Feb 2010 22:36:20 +0000

actually i was …
actually i was describing my house!! xD but yeah TONS of chores to go with it! maids are helpful but they only come on mondayss

By: JMClover101

JMClover101 — Thu, 04 Feb 2010 22:36:20 +0000

Teehe awesome!!!!!! …
Teehe awesome!!!!!! i likey it! i wish i had a big house…but that would mean more chores…-_-…. Awesomee chapter!! now immma go read the next one!

By: Shay081793

Shay081793 — Thu, 04 Feb 2010 22:36:20 +0000

I’m sooooo stoked …
I’m sooooo stoked for the next part xD I wonder where Nancy went. She’s probably checking out the house. I wonder why Mr. Harvey like, owes Joe. I wonder… He must’ve dealt him or something like that. Anyways, it was an awesome, amazing descriptive chapter! And like! WOO! I lurved it! And I felt totally stupid when I didn’t know what obstreperously meant xD But yeah, I get to use the excuse that I’m Dutch as well as English LOVE YOU BABYCAKES!

By: jadealexmorgan

jadealexmorgan — Thu, 04 Feb 2010 22:36:20 +0000

A new house… that …
A new house… that sounds interesting… I hope it turns out okay!
and you know, I don’t think Nancy is too fond of Joe right now lol… let’s just hope they can make up!
Great chapter! Loved it!

By: cutierose1234

cutierose1234 — Thu, 04 Feb 2010 22:36:20 +0000

wow, they’re on the …
wow, they’re on the run but STILL manage to get an awesome house/mansion?! Maybe I should tell my mum to tell her friend to call her brother to get in touch with someone in the business and then get back to me, hmm? lol Seriously, my mums friends brother has connections! Creepy! xD
Everything just keep happening to poor Nancy lol Although, that would probably be me. I’m a clutz lol
Awesome chapter!…again!
Love you!
@;—- Oh look! A rose! ;D haha

By: irongirlstri

irongirlstri — Thu, 04 Feb 2010 22:36:20 +0000

Love it!! haha
The …
Love it!! haha
The keys flying under the fridge would happen to Nancy.
How typical! Nothing goes right.
But now where did she wander off to??? With a mansion so freaking huge she could be anywhere!

By: irongirlstri

irongirlstri — Thu, 04 Feb 2010 22:36:20 +0000

Yup! That sounds …
Yup! That sounds good! Just use an even amount of story per part, because sometimes you’ll end up with one long part and one super short part. haha It happened to me once, litterally I had like one paragraph in the second part. lolz

By: babycakesRgood

babycakesRgood — Thu, 04 Feb 2010 22:36:20 +0000

AHHH the first …
AHHH the first chapter is too long!! im like I CANT CUT ANYTHING!!!! should i just make a 2-parter?

By: babycakesRgood

babycakesRgood — Thu, 04 Feb 2010 22:36:19 +0000

yeah idk but i …
yeah idk but i didnt get this comment either..hmm maybe utube is suspecting our dealings online? LOL